Sunday, January 14, 2018

Trevor Scott Carlson: 2/4

I wish I couldn't speak the language
of never-ending elegy,

that I could unlearn its alphabet.
That I didn't have to bail out the water

of this vessel I never asked for, upended
like a husk ripped from the fruit

of a garden long gone.

2 comments:

  1. I love how the language (I wish I couldn't...could unlearn...didn't have...never asked) insists on a labor from the reader in minding the inversions/negatives the way the subject labors in the world of their poem.

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  2. There's no waste here, and everything's working together - super tight!

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Thanks for playing along at home!

1 month down and some new poems in your pocket. Here's to lookin' forward to the rest of 2018, folks.